英文电话对话，恳请高手修改。

DATE:03/28/2011
P:1
NAME:CHEN BIN .GUO BIAO
THE NONSTOP TALKER
A: Good morning, this is Fashion clothes customer service, May I help you?（不用how）
B: This is Lion Feuchtwanger, I want to return my jeans（根据他后面说的应该不是单数）, I just bought the jeans a couple of days ago, the size of the （特指）jeans （they去掉 重复了） do not fit me. Originally, I wanted（当时的想法，用过去时态） to give my brother the jeans but neither could he the jeans.(否定句，也不的表达形式) I find(发现 discover这个词一般用于表示比较重大的发现) that he has fatten recently…(Listen to the caller initially)
A: Mr. Lion Feuchtwanger, I'm sorry for my interrupting. (感觉这个更轻松)Let me make sure I’m following you (Use caller’s name and pardon) you want to return your jeans. Is that right? (Ask closed-ended questions) if you want to return the jeans，you would remain the jeans' label and receipt. That is our guideline.(感觉原来的句子让人有点看不懂)
B: I remember I did not take them out.（代词放中间） Please, allow me a second to make sure.（避免啰嗦）
A: sure, you can check it （用it代替了事，situation好中文）now or another time, as long as you are convenient.（只要你方便）
B: Fortunately, the whole things they are intact.
A: Mr. Lion Feuchtwanger, It’s good for you, You need to remain both the label （是不是both？bath label 洗澡标签，没这东西吧）and the receipt of the jeans, and （must去掉没必要）return the jean within 2 weeks.(Summarize the action to be taken.)
B: I got that down, I will return it tomorrow.
A: our business time （改为营业时间比较好）is from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm, you can come during it（在此期间）.
B: All right, I will be on time.
A: Appreciate for choosing our Fashion Clothes store.（这样表达会口语化点）。（and去掉，前后2个主语不一致） Feel free to contact us anytime.(Close professionally)
B: Thanks, Good-bye.
A: Good-bye.