关于企业战略的，请教英语高手（急）

要做好企业战略管理,首先要建立好企业绩效测评体系。
To do well the strategic management should establish the systems measurement of the performance for the corporations.
企业战略管理从狭义上说就是对企业战略的制定、实施、控制和修正进行的管理。
The strategic management is the management of the making and implement and control etc.
企业战略管理的关键是如何确立企业的竞争优势，这就要根据企业的具体情况来制定。
The crucial point of enterprise strategy management is how to attain the competitive predominance. This will be determined according to the circumstance of individual enterprises.
综合运用企业技术经济学、市场营销学和企业战略管理、企业人力资源管理等理论，系统分析了钼行业竞争力、市场供求关系、企业面对的挑战与机遇、优势与劣势，提出了企业市场定位的基本思路和技术创新战略的基本框架，还就战略实施中的要点进行了探讨。 Using some theories,such as technic economics,marketing and stratagic management of enterprises,the human resources management in molybdenum industry,relation between supply and demand in market,challenge and opportunity,predominance and inferior position which enterprises must face were analysed.The basic thought of market orientation for enterprises and basic frame of stratagem of technique innovation were raised.Main points in process of implement were discussed also.