大学英语口语考试前的自我介绍

What I want to share with you is my travel experience.
I like travelling ever since my childhood,but not the kind like following a tourist group.There is a kind of travel called donkey travel, that is to traverse or climb or explore on foot.I used to travel from Hefei to Shanghai by bike during the summer holiday of my second year in high school. We spent a week preparing for this event.We bought two mountain bikes, took lots of madicines , supplies, bike parts and repair tools.I set out with my best friend Yao from Hefei on 8th August 2008.On the journey, we passed many cities like Feidong,Quanjiao,Nanjing,Zhenjiang,Wuxi,Shuzhou,Kunshan.And finally reaached Shanghai on 15th August.It was sunny and hot during the days of our journey.I still remember that when we entered Nanjing and pushed the bikes to dine at a KFC restuarant,we just dicovered the brake rubber was almost melt.When we reached Kunshang,god finally had mercy on us and rain fell from sky,of course, this good weather lasted until we reached Shanghai.All in wet,We took a phote at the Waitan.Though it was not the first time for us to come to Shanghai,I dare say it was my most exciting trip to Shanghai in my whole life.We lived in the house of a Shanghai friend for three days.During these days,we sold the bikes we rode,and visited that place under the guidance of the friend for two days and a half. Then we returned to Hefei by train
翻譯：
我想和大家分享的是我旅行上的一些经历。
我从小就喜欢旅行，但不是跟着旅行团的那种旅行。有一种出行的方式被称作驴行，那种徒步穿越，攀登或者探访。我曾经骑自行车从合肥去过上海，那是我高二的暑假。我们为了这个活动准备了一周，买了两辆新的山地车，还准备了很多药品啊食物啊和自行车零件以及修理工具。我和我最好的朋友，遥，于2007年8月8日从合肥出发，中途经过了肥东，全椒，南京，镇江，无锡，苏州，昆山等城市，最终在8月15日到达上海，。沿途的几天都是很热的大太阳天，我还能清楚的记得在进入南京市区我们推着车去肯德基吃东西，才发现刹车皮都几乎化了。在到达昆山的时候，上帝终于放过了我们，天空下起了雨，这样的“好天气”，当然，这是对我们来说的。一直持续到了我们抵达上海，我们浑身湿漉漉的在外滩留影，虽然对我们两个来说，这都不是第一次来上海。但是我敢说，这会是一辈子中我们到上海市感觉最兴奋的一次！我们在一个上海的朋友家住了三天。在这期间，我们吧自己骑来的自行车都卖了，在朋友的带领下游览了两天半就坐火车回到了合肥~