求雅思7级水平英语作文！

Nowadays, with fast development of the whole world, the living standard of people has improved a lot. More and more people choose to traval abroad. Therefore, it is really a good opportunity for chinese to develop their tourism. With a lot of foreigner coming to visit our scenic spots, the local gorvornment will earn more money to develop local economy. At the same time, the govornment can use the income to protect our spots better. Let's take West Lake as an exemple. West Lake is famous for its beautiful scenery and popular legend. Every year there are lots of tourists coimg here to enjoy the fantastic scenery. Thanks to the satisfying income, the local gorvornment not only improve citizen's daily life but also upgrade the West Lake, which can be in a  a virtuous circle...大概都提到了，你自己在精简修改一下吧。。