研究生复试英语自我介绍，请帮忙修改指正，谢谢

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself.加上这一句，要不然，直接介绍太唐突了。

My hometown is taian city ,which is a beautiful city in shangdong province .你直接说山东不好，范围太大。

successfully accomplished a social science research which entitled privatization of public utilities and social equity. 这一句感觉太长，而且单词不好读，如果发音不好，老师可能不会明白它的意思。慎用(可以说的慢一点)或修改。

严谨的学术态度 rigorous academic attitudes。scholarship不行。

学习经历那段没大的毛病，还可以吧。

研究生计划写的不好，说了那么多，基本就一个计划，而且感觉行文那么别扭呢。给你一段，据此修改下：
If luckily I got the chance to learn environment engineering in Tongji University,I will concentrate on the study and research in this field. First,I will learn the theoretical knowledge deeply ,constructing a solid base for my future work；Second,I would like to do some practical work with the help of my professor and classmates. And through this,I can get something that cannot be acquired from the textbooks. I believe after 2 years of learning,my dream will finally come true……

总体来说还可以，审完两个感觉，用词有些偏，不能以为普通的词就不好，不是英语专业的，能介绍的明白、无误就是好。二是有的句子太长，跟写作文似的，不适合口语，如果非要这样，那就要慢点说，一定要让老师明白你的意思。these are my advices.
不要虎头蛇尾啊，就像过了初试，就不好好准备复试了，这可不行的。